It looks like you’re making good progress, Nigel.
In “Traction Engine Design and Construction” G.F.A. Gilbert suggests full-size practise was to make the clearance volume 7 to 12% of swept volume, and the passage area 5 to 10% of the piston area (I can’t find the reference for the latter, so I might have got that from somewhere else).
Previous contributors to this forum have suggested that full-size proportions will correctly work with models.
Of course, as you mention, actually fitting sensible sized walls, etc., between the passages can be a challenge at small scales – I’m currently wrestling with designing the very complicated steam ways for a Fowler Z7S – what looks like a decent wall thickness on the screen can turn out to be 0.5 mm or something ridiculous when you actually check what you’ve drawn!