Normally one would invoke the following equation:
Ebay insert = crap shoot
However the linked to Yamaloy insert (even if they're not the ones being used) are sold by Cromwell, albeit at a slightly lower price. But they're on 2 days which makes me slightly suspicious as Cromwell customers are most likely to be commercial machine shops, not used to waiting.
From the picture the ridges seem quite obvious, but they're stated to be a bit over 2 tenths of the thou deep. At that sort of depth I don't think they'd be so obvious? Not sure it has a bearing on the finish, but 3 thou is a pretty shallow finishing cut.
I've not really had a problem turning bronze or gunmetal with inserts so difficult to make suggestions. But the wide spacing makes one think of a machine related problem rather than the basic cutting process or, possibly, the casting itself?
Andrew